Reflection on Draft One

The first Draft of the play can be called full of twists and turns but eventually I think our group manage to show the topic we want to reveal to the audience with the help of Leo since we lose one group member by accident.Our topic is the role of the feud in the play and how it is related to the tragedy. One of the problems we faced was the three scenes were too lengthy. In order to reveal our topic and control the time, we have to cut quite a lot of the lines in the original play, and at the same time, keep enough plots and sentences to emphasize how the feud is the inner motivate that causes characters, like Tybalt,in the play to make certain actions. However, I think we condense the play successfully. 

Personally,I think I need to work on the play context. Some of the words in the play I cannot accurately pronounce and some of the phrase I cannot fluently speak, like "a pretty piece of flesh". Besides, I need to try to memorize the lines because if I keep peeking the iPad, I cannot perform and show audience the feeling and action of characters well. Besides, our group need to plan the two fighting scenes more thoroughly because when we were acting the last part of act one scene one, we did not show the intensity and seriousness of the fight.